Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 26, 2001, 4:12 am

General: Get down men, I said get down!Young Soldier: Sir Im hit!General: Damn it, I said get down! Medic!Young Soldier: Im losing a lot of blood sir.General: Lay down Medic!Young Soldier: Dont bother...

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 26, 2001, 4:27 am

welcome to the maelstrom, marc! wonderful entrance you've made ... a vivid tale you've told ... and perhaps those are the very thoughts that may be found in the final moments ... much enjoyed ..."For...

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 26, 2001, 10:35 am

A chilling tale...but filled with a kind of melancholy hope, despite the impending end...very well done......and Welcome to The Maelstrom, Marc...look forward to more from you...Every new beginning...

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 26, 2001, 2:39 pm

Marc, Such an impact you have made on me with this piece. I can't wait to read more of your works.........Welcome to The Maelstrom friend RavenTo Raven's Haven

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 26, 2001, 3:00 pm

This sent shivers down my spine.. this is so full emotions..wonderfully written.. placing the reader inside the scene..Excellent read..Huggz,-InnerSpirit- ~ A home without books is a body without a...

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 26, 2001, 4:49 pm

Thanks everyone, I'm sure we all know how good it feels to be complemented on your work, especially when you're still pretty new at it.Thanks again.

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 27, 2001, 2:18 pm

I lost a very close companion in the Vietnam War, I guess while I read this, I hoped he died quickly. It is a wonderful poem, but it made me so sad to think that Roger might have died this way, alone...

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 27, 2001, 3:38 pm

This was so real I thought I was right there in the action!! Very well written,, the emotions conveyed were outstanding!! I'd love to read more!! ~When the world is dark and cold, I know I'll have you...

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 27, 2001, 4:17 pm

Thanks guys, and sorry to hear about your friend neab, wars are about the most idiotic and confusing events around today. Nothing ever gets solved and the main people who suffer are the men out on the...

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Re: Thoughts Of A Young Soldier Now Done

April 27, 2001, 4:51 pm

No, not bad, I very much liked the poem, just made me a little sad, but we must remember our past, least we make the same mistakes over again. neababyblu~

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